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| The pretty world with an ugly face |
When I say
something right
They say, "you’re wonderful"
But when
the ideas aren’t bright
I am told,
‘you are like a fool’
When I
dress up so nice
People say
you look cute
But when I
wear something that has a low price
Their jeer
makes me totally mute
When my
works make them happy
People say
you’re kind
But when
they feel crappy
‘Speaking
evil’, they never mind
When I sing a song of praise for them
They say, "lyrics are pure and clear"
When
my words try to blame
Acceptance
is hard for them to bear
When I am helpful
for the day
People say
you’re a good friend
But when I
am forced out of their way
They say
our relations come to an end
When I visit
even at the darkest night
People say
you’re brave and bold
But when I
am out of their sight
Their bitter talks about me, make me cold
When I share
something good
People say
you’re always lavish
But when I
ask something they could
They feel I
am acting so childish
While the
world is full of opposites
I have dreamt things to work as I wish
But when I have things that never fits
My dreams
are forced to squish
Like the
thorns in the rose
Like the
highs that have lows
To reach
far and to walk so close
Now I must
know, ‘opposites’ and all of those
When my dreams give the deadliest blows
When
failures happen to the wishes I propose
Then to the
world, I hate to disclose
And makes
me lie over these to enclose
So that
nobody around me really knows
Thus, it's
been a lesson for me to compose
And accept
all kinds of throes
Which always
try to oppose
Its a wonderful poem...lines hiding and disclosing the human nature...
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr. Sonam Tobgyel for going through my immature lines. Words from a persuasive bloggers like you are truly encouraging.
DeleteYes sir, it's really a beautiful poem. And such articles are expected from you who writes well. :-)
ReplyDeleteHey Sonam,
DeleteIt has been long that I could not write because of the incessant presentations. Thank you for visiting my site.
I am sorry I could not even go through your articles late recently. But I will later sometimes.
Thank you for the comments.
Nice Poem Dumcho. Enjoyed it and keep writing.
ReplyDeleteTshewang sir,
DeleteThank you for the comments. I am hesitant to receive those praise for the article that I have written.
Your article on "The Effect of Cooperative Learning Method" stands with a nice research dressing. Keep it up.
Thank you Dumcho. It's one of the two researches i am working on. 'Cooperative Learning' I have just completed. Working on the second-'Analysis of teacher-student verbal interaction using Flanders' Interaction Analysis System (FIAS) in teaching Biology in Samtse District'. I'll soon post the research article for that too.
DeleteTshewang sir,
DeleteFollow Lamarck's law of use and disuse. The research skills which you already have, if restored unattended might turn out to be dysfunctional or weary. So, keep writing.
Beautiful poem. Keep composing more.
ReplyDeleteThank you sir for visiting my blog. The words from a robust bloggers like you keeps me moving. I am truly thankful for taking interest to read my scribblings.
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