All the days of this week
Brought agony to me at its peak
Computer screen, first, started to turn blank
Displaying nothing, to be frank
Every small matter turned so big
Friends came not to relief but dig
Gossip then gave off its nasty smoke
Halting all my work to choke
I suddenly became lonely and alone
Just with the reasons still unknown
Kindness in life seemed viciously mean
Letting me infest with beliefs so unclean
More infection killed my courage to grow
Never over those catch-22s arranged in a row
Of all, my courage died, even
funeral’s over
Persistently I imitated to remain sober
Quietly realizing, to live a life is too short
Reviewed some newer ways instead, to comfort
Seriously I tried on my own accord
To the extent that I can afford
Until something ran off my hand
Voraciously, but still, I didn’t lose my stand
Worrying I knew, will rather add an insult
Xerox of those miseries, I hated to consult
Yesterday’s pain shouldn’t make me weep
Zeal of my mind always spoke these lines in deep.
“If you CAN solve your PROBLEM, then
what is the need of worrying?
Nice nice sir...
ReplyDeleteThank you Sangay sir for the compliments.
ReplyDeleteSo you could find all the words alphabetically to describe your weak's feelings. Just amazing. Nice one though!
ReplyDeleteThank you Riku sir for taking time in reading my page. I really had terrible time these days.
ReplyDeleteSometimes bad days come to us. However, nothing is impermanent. Hope things can change fast to the better.
ReplyDeleteNice work sir. I also attempted few days back to write poem in this format. But I successfully failed. You did which I couldn't. Loved it!
ReplyDeleteMadam Rima, I knew bad things usually come to our life but these days it was terribly pathetic to live on. Anyways, thank you for the wishes and prayers.
ReplyDeleteSherab sir, thank you for the compliments first of all. I know people like you can write even better. I hope to see yours very soon.
ReplyDeleteHaha...such a clever poem!
ReplyDeleteOh I so enjoyed reading this. It truly lifted my spirits.
Thank you so much :)
Thank you Ygraine for visiting my blog always. You keep me inspired with your beautiful comments.
ReplyDeleteThank you once again.
Some true sayings here, and thanks so much for joining my blog. Greatly appreciated! I am now following/joining yours. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Nosey for dropping by my amateur blog. I am glad that you are following my pages too. Thank you a lot.
ReplyDeleteThat was very clever! You wove the story well through the alphabet.
ReplyDeleteWorrying robs us. 90% of the time, our worries never happen. That's a waste of worry-effort.
Thank you for the compliments. Yup, I agree with your points. Thank you for visiting my page. I am humbled and encouraged.
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